The Mr. Nile Experiment
28: Deus Ex Narrator
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No:		 What?
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Not like this:
  Who is that?
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  The 28 days are up.
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Well. More or less:
  What the-?
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    No!
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Yes:		   You can't do this! I obeyed all the rules!
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And now I'm changing them:
  But...
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    ...but you can't-
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I can. Writer's prerogative.
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What now? What happens to me?
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You?:
   
 

You stayi
here:
No...
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I won't be writing about you again.
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Your story isi
over:
No!
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Don't leave me! I can be him!
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He's nothing!
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Just... just an anagram with...
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With delusions of grandeur!
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I can do it better!
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I can be better!
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No...
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...please?
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Don't-
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Wake up, Mr. Nile:
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  I... I'm alive?
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  Well. I suppose that's a
matter open to some debate.
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  You... you saved me?
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I did:
Why?
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Because you surprised
me, Mr. Nile. Repeatedly.
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And I've just spent 28 days watching your character develop.
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I'm hardly going to throw all that away in favour of someone marginally more evil than you were to begin with.
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What now?
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Now? Now I'd like
my eye back. 		 
  Oh. Yes. Yes of course.
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It went well, don't you
think? The experiment?
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I mean, there was a bit
more plot than I expected.
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But I think it went well.
   
   
 
 
 
 
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Yes.
 
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I think it did.
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